The first attempt at the new editing process went fine. I wish I’d thought of it sooner so I’m not rushing to catch up, but I like it well enough. It does raise some post-revision issues I’m going to have to figure out and schedule. This process does allow for integrating some of the "big note" items I was worried about doing during this revision. I still really, really miss MFA school and a mentor, however. Drafting in a vacuum is actually a lot better than revising in one.